15 October 2019

One day


We wake up under a marked sky.
Everything we believed in flies by.
The dreams won't come true anymore.
And the pink dawns dissolve into fall.






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26 comments:

  1. SandiOctober 15, 2019 12:13 pm

    That is amazing!

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  2. bailiOctober 17, 2019 8:50 am

    oh this is remarkable dear Edit :)

    so lovely poetry to support this sublime view

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    1. EditOctober 18, 2019 6:05 am

      Thank you very much, dearest Baili! 😊

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  3. Spare Parts and PicsOctober 18, 2019 6:26 am

    Wow, wonderful and unusual!

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  4. JimOctober 18, 2019 8:08 am

    Cool.

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  5. JoyfulOctober 18, 2019 12:02 pm

    Beautiful photo. I relate to your poem.

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  6. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comOctober 18, 2019 3:32 pm

    This is absolutely beautiful. Simplicity....so few words....yet such a depth of emotion.

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  7. indybevOctober 18, 2019 6:04 pm

    "We wake up under a marked sky" … wonderful line! So many ways to go with this preface! Great write.

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  8. Frank HubenyOctober 18, 2019 7:54 pm

    Very nice sound and sense.

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  9. brudbergOctober 19, 2019 9:49 pm

    The marked sky seems so ominous... seems like some dawns are cursed.

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    1. EditOctober 28, 2019 8:29 am

      It seemed someone marked our world... Maybe to destroy, maybe to protect it...
      Thank you, Björn!

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  10. KerfeOctober 20, 2019 11:31 pm

    The wheels are always turning.

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    1. EditOctober 28, 2019 8:22 am

      Oh yes, that's right... Thank you, Kerfe!

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  11. Lowcarb team memberOctober 20, 2019 11:41 pm

    Lovely words and images.

    All the best Jan

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  12. RajlakshmiOctober 22, 2019 3:14 pm

    That's a fascinating and unique cloud formation. Great capture. Loved the verses too.

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  13. handmade by amaliaOctober 26, 2019 4:26 pm

    Another lovely poem, Edit. It is always fun to visit.
    Amalia
    xo

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